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  COLD TASK Term 2 2022 NUMERATIVE
Name Tailah         

That Night

Introduction: In class, we do a 'COLD TASK' to find out what we already know. our cold task was on narrative writing. This is a snapshot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself.

We are learning to self-assess our writing so we know what we are good at and what we need to work on...

I am learning in my self-assessment, that I need to use more detail in my writing more interesting.

I am learning to work on...

my self-assessment, and what do the ingredients mean (figurative langauage?)

What I want to improve on is...

I want to improve my work, For my parents.

At the end of school,  I walked home by myself in the middle of a crowded street,   full of massive or tiny cars.  It was kinda scary for me cause it was my first time!  Walking home.  even though I love to walk I was still terrified,  worried I might get run over!  like the chicken crossing the road and getting run over!  My brain was trying to tell me to go back,  But my heart was telling me to go and not be afraid to do things.  So as I crossed the road I saw my dad's truck parked up by east school so I ran over to him and said “Dad, dad! I did it, I did it!”  I shouted.  “Good Job Hunny!,  You can walk from now on,”  said, dad.  But do you know how I felt when he said that…  I was too speechless to talk.   I thought that was it?  So now on I walk… and walk… and walk.     We drove back home and it was 8;00 at night… I couldn’t go to sleep because of what my dad had said to me,  His voice would be stuck in my brain all night long.  “Good job Hunny…”  “Good job Hunny…”  “what a good girl you….”  “AAAHHH!” I screamed.  My dad rushed into the room worried, anxious, desperate- which of these was my dad feeling?  “Are you alright Hunny buns?” said dad.